The Upset Tummy
Once upon a time, in the wonderful city of New York, a boy named Rizwan fell sick. It was a dreadful thing to happen, as on that day, he and his fellow classmates were going to watch a movie. Rizwan had pictured it in his mind as a wonderful time.
He also had gathered up his guts to confess his feelings towards Ambika, a girl he liked. He had liked her ever since he saw her in RCB (reception class in primary school). Ambika also liked Rizwan, but she thought waiting for the appropriate time to tell him was a good idea. But let's not wander off the topic. Let us delve into the darkness of Rizwan's body to see what else was going on in his guts.
His antibodies were working very hard. They scouted far and wide, up his oesophagus, in his stomach, in the confusing small intestine, but could still not find out anything. They were not aware that some bacteria had just multiplied and had gathered in a powerful army in the depths of the poor boy's body.
But how did they find that out? Well, there was a young little antibody playing in the large stomach and having fun with his friends. He wandered off a little bit more and heard a sound of marching. He squealed in delight as he loved seeing the antibody army march past. But this time he did not see that wonderful army. Instead, he saw a cohort of ugly, disgusting bacteria march past. He ran as fast as he could, to the antibody headquarters in the vast Cerebrum in the brain. On hearing the little guys report, the Antibodies immediately became alert.
The great, lion hearted, terrifying general Grunt CXXXXXXXXVIIII - Antibody in charge- gave them a long and courageous speech. The Antibodies decided to use indirect combat in the battle, that is attacking from long range. They sent spies to watch and discover the plans of the Bacteria Army but they failed to discover anything. Left with little choice, the Antibody army started marching towards their target, to exterminate it once and for all.
Meanwhile, in the wide outside world, Ambika felt sorry for Rizwan. She decided to go to his house to comfort him. Rizwan could not believe it when he saw her on his doorstep. He tried to get up to greet her but immediately fell down because the pain in his stomach was too great for him to handle. Ambika held him and put a warm towel on his head. Rizwan thought that this was even better than going to watch the movie. They started chatting and made an endless conversation, laughing all the time.
Only the poor Antibodies were not laughing. Instead their faces were beaded with sweat while engaging the enemy with their catapults and massive weapons I cannot describe. They were working very hard but the bacteria still came on them, in their vast and superior numbers. They advanced slowly, and finally attacked the tired antibodies directly. But the Antibodies did not give up. Instead, to the bacteria's great disappointment they attacked with all their strength and power.
Suddenly, out of the sky reinforcement rained on the Bacteria. Yes, they were the Suppository's that Rizwan's mother had just inserted into his body through his bum. They caused massive explosions, and out of them, Great, big men came out and towered over the scared bacteria. The scummy bugs tried to retreat, in every possible way but they could not.
I cannot tell you how they were planning to escape because that is a P2C2E ( Problem too complicated to explain ). But the Antibodies fortified with the medication showed no mercy. They killed every bacteria they could see in their sight until all of them were destroyed. And in the outside world, Rizwan gradually became better. He finally explained everything to Ambika, who gave him a big, tight hug. And that was the end of Rizwan's upset tummy and confused heart. It was time for the Antibodies to party, and some were already drunk of victory and joy!!!
Once upon a time, in the wonderful city of New York, a boy named Rizwan fell sick. It was a dreadful thing to happen, as on that day, he and his fellow classmates were going to watch a movie. Rizwan had pictured it in his mind as a wonderful time.
He also had gathered up his guts to confess his feelings towards Ambika, a girl he liked. He had liked her ever since he saw her in RCB (reception class in primary school). Ambika also liked Rizwan, but she thought waiting for the appropriate time to tell him was a good idea. But let's not wander off the topic. Let us delve into the darkness of Rizwan's body to see what else was going on in his guts.
His antibodies were working very hard. They scouted far and wide, up his oesophagus, in his stomach, in the confusing small intestine, but could still not find out anything. They were not aware that some bacteria had just multiplied and had gathered in a powerful army in the depths of the poor boy's body.
But how did they find that out? Well, there was a young little antibody playing in the large stomach and having fun with his friends. He wandered off a little bit more and heard a sound of marching. He squealed in delight as he loved seeing the antibody army march past. But this time he did not see that wonderful army. Instead, he saw a cohort of ugly, disgusting bacteria march past. He ran as fast as he could, to the antibody headquarters in the vast Cerebrum in the brain. On hearing the little guys report, the Antibodies immediately became alert.
The great, lion hearted, terrifying general Grunt CXXXXXXXXVIIII - Antibody in charge- gave them a long and courageous speech. The Antibodies decided to use indirect combat in the battle, that is attacking from long range. They sent spies to watch and discover the plans of the Bacteria Army but they failed to discover anything. Left with little choice, the Antibody army started marching towards their target, to exterminate it once and for all.
Meanwhile, in the wide outside world, Ambika felt sorry for Rizwan. She decided to go to his house to comfort him. Rizwan could not believe it when he saw her on his doorstep. He tried to get up to greet her but immediately fell down because the pain in his stomach was too great for him to handle. Ambika held him and put a warm towel on his head. Rizwan thought that this was even better than going to watch the movie. They started chatting and made an endless conversation, laughing all the time.
Only the poor Antibodies were not laughing. Instead their faces were beaded with sweat while engaging the enemy with their catapults and massive weapons I cannot describe. They were working very hard but the bacteria still came on them, in their vast and superior numbers. They advanced slowly, and finally attacked the tired antibodies directly. But the Antibodies did not give up. Instead, to the bacteria's great disappointment they attacked with all their strength and power.
Suddenly, out of the sky reinforcement rained on the Bacteria. Yes, they were the Suppository's that Rizwan's mother had just inserted into his body through his bum. They caused massive explosions, and out of them, Great, big men came out and towered over the scared bacteria. The scummy bugs tried to retreat, in every possible way but they could not.
I cannot tell you how they were planning to escape because that is a P2C2E ( Problem too complicated to explain ). But the Antibodies fortified with the medication showed no mercy. They killed every bacteria they could see in their sight until all of them were destroyed. And in the outside world, Rizwan gradually became better. He finally explained everything to Ambika, who gave him a big, tight hug. And that was the end of Rizwan's upset tummy and confused heart. It was time for the Antibodies to party, and some were already drunk of victory and joy!!!
Dear Arjun your imaginations are getting very strong and sharp. Keep writing your stories and this will help you in many ways in times to come.
ReplyDeleteGood work, keep it up
Nana
Hi Arjun, Really enjoyed reading this one. I like your sense of narrative and turn of phrase. cannot wait to read more from you!
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Mummy
Hi Arjun,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing such a creative story! I loved how you switched between Rizwan's inner gut turmoil and his feelings for Ambika :) And if I may, I would love to borrow your phrase - P2C2E - it's perfect to use in so many situations!
Looking forward to many more stories from you :)
Lovely story Arjun.
ReplyDeleteLoved the narration and the phrase P2C2E
Keep up the good work :)
it is a nice story! I love the expression P2C2E!
ReplyDeleteHilarious, super creative and engaging:-)
ReplyDeleteWell done Arjun, my daughter has a blog too and she writes little poems and draws a little from time to time:-)
Right now she is going through a die-hard Harry Potter phase, hopefully will emerge back into the muggle world soon.
Keep blogging and have fun!
Archana
Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments! I will continue to writing !! BTW, P2C2E is a delightful phrase I read from a Salman Rushdie book :)
ReplyDeleteWow Arjun! very nicely written. Looks like you might be a writer like your mom.
ReplyDeleteArjun! That's an amazing story!
ReplyDeleteThank you all very much for your wonderful comments. But Ana aunty, I am torn between many ambitions. It is a contstant dilemma. And Swethaa I am very sorry for writing the you-know-what in para 2. Please forgive me.
ReplyDeleteHey Arjun,
ReplyDeleteThis was incredible and now im eagerly waiting for your new posts. This was great.
Keep up the good wok,
Piyush
Thanks Piyush bhaiya. I am writing another story. Hope you like it!!!
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